I Won`t Tell You 'No' Comments

You have a real gift for conveying the emotions of true love. I really enjoyed reading and experiencing this poem.

abt=about? my favorite lines: To eat a dozen cakes Or to make silly mistakes, ............................. mostly i like this because i like cake! more favorites: To grow old together Or to stay young forever, To change your mood from wild, To make me a mom of your child, .................... so it that YOU in the poem and the photo (with baby!) ? ? i liked all of the Ors. and how you led up to the last four lines, ending with 'the title'. but bow? cupid's bow? then it would rhyme with know and indicate some romance for 'someone'. otherwise i am tempted to read bow as in the actor took a bow at the end of her performance; then it would not rhyme so well with 'know', but it still might fulfill what you are saying (even though i'm not sure what you are saying) . thanks for sharing. bri :)

The best line is the one... 'To make me a mom of your child...' This means a real love To the one you love...

A wonderful read! Makes one pause and ponder..well penned and has a certain intrique about it. D

Fine rythmic flow, emergent soft thoughts and very sincere sentiments, true love. [I advise you not to be so good indeed, see Nivdetta Bagchi, a bit of a fighter], no offence inteded though. Lovely piece. Enjoyed reading it.10+++

That's a good call...a good promise too! Honest sincere and bold and all the more poetic! 10

that's a really gd poem, i like when u said: (If to be washed off, only with one wave, Me wordless at your dad`s grave,) specially the wave part...lol gd poem

Hello Emma, This is a gem of a find! I love the rolling flow of this poem and well as the carefully constructed wording, the rhyme is good in the most part as well. The poem builds to a great crescendo and the final line hits home the greatly grafted message you have penned. Doesn't matter where you are or what you are doing, if they open up and share their soul, they'll always find you beside them. Add a smile to the whole feeling of the poem because of the sentiments you build up, seemingly explodes with a mutual respect and love at the end. Superb Emma, keep on doing what you do best! Dale :)