I Won'T Give Up Anymore, This Is My Dream And I Adore Comments

A lovely poem, reminds me of the last two lines of the poem INVICTUS: I AM THE MASTER OF MY FATE, THE CAPTAIN OF MY SOUL. Beautiful indeed. Thanks for sharing. Please read my poem MZANSI AND THE BALLOT BOX.

This poem is a shiny sparkling poem, and I LOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOVE it.

wow, i can really tell that this came from the heart. i am literally bussing with hope right now! !

realy beautiful gamal she3r jamel kitir shikran.

Very well written (: I love your style! The topic is just amazing, I can tell it's meaningful and special to you but other people can also relate. I also absolutely love the rhyme and the rhythm of it. The ability to write the way you do is truly a gift, my friend. Keep it up (: ! ! !

Well written and, a beautiful poem

A really good poem, with a great flow to it. May i invite you to read my poem called, Boy to a man.

i like the change in the rhyme scheme, it helps the poem flow nicely. well done.

really wonderful poem full of hope and stronge starting wothout any fair, well done +10.

such a beautiful write..well done

So much creative exuberance in your writing, with a positive spirit. Each stanza stands out with a challenge for living and moving forward. Keep up the good work. You may read and share my work also. TFS

So much creative exuberance in your writing, with a positive spirit. Each stanza stands out with a challenge for living and moving forward. Keep up the good work. You may read and share my work also. TFS

thats good. It is. rlly. Im glad you take an intrest in writing. not many pppl do anymore

WONDERFUL! ! i absolutely love it. speaks volumes to everypart of me Great job

Invite you to read my new poem Light a Lamp of Faith and pls give your valubale comment Regards sam

I love this! You are verryyyy talented!

Great! very very intense! I like it a lot, and I think you have done a beautiful job here!

Great! very very intense! I like it a lot, and I think you have done a beautiful job here!

Amazing. You are a good poet and expecting great poems from you. Please comment on my poem.

The thing that i like in all your poems is the spirit, i live the positive aura you release in your write...This is what we should always have! ! ! I am glad you always exhibiting this from your soul...Never give up and Chase your dream no matter what Abdallah! ! ! _Unwritten Soul