why it seems so dark
though my heart is on fire
might be because
I’ve been inventing lies
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The whole poem soaked with grief...but you wring out the grief from those lines sportingly with a smile...'i won't die albeit love dies out'...the poem is great for the attitude it brings out...10
this poem somehow reminded me of raj kap[oor's 'mera naam joker.' i liked the objectivity with which this is written. the refrain adds to the strength of the poem...