Tuesday, October 13, 2009

I Won'T Die Comments

Rating: 5.0

why it seems so dark
though my heart is on fire
might be because
I’ve been inventing lies
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Dr Kamran Haider Bukhari
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Indira Babbellapati 15 October 2009

this poem somehow reminded me of raj kap[oor's 'mera naam joker.' i liked the objectivity with which this is written. the refrain adds to the strength of the poem...

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Kesav Easwaran 14 October 2009

The whole poem soaked with grief...but you wring out the grief from those lines sportingly with a smile...'i won't die albeit love dies out'...the poem is great for the attitude it brings out...10

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