I Won't Be Controlled Comments

2) cont'd: Alexie, Thank You for this inspirational poem that motivates me even more!

Too many follow like sheep and never pursue their dreams. It's never too late to make that 'bold move'. I'm in my retirement and never letting up on following my dreams.

Absolutely spot on! Every human being should have the freedom to live their life thevway they want to. Of course it's a challenge and we face insurmountable odds but the value of livlfe is our choice. Hope your well!

I like this poem a lot. Very inspirational.

Hi im from among us my name was sOmEoNe something like that

Do as you want, be your own person.

Being controlled like a robot isn't what life is about. Please make your own choices and don't let this life go to waste. Love the poem, the rhymes are adorable and the selection of words is great...It just describes everything in such a unique and creative way. GOOD JOB!

Brave utterances set aside for honest reflection. An insightful introspective poem nicely embellished with poetic rhyme and rhythm.