Tuesday, July 18, 2006

I Woke Up And You Were Gone Comments

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Since you left
I have been staring at the ceiling,
Lying on the floor,
Tearing out my hair out of boredom,
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Patrick O'Reilly
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Max Reif 24 July 2006

Padric, the last line is magnificent, the rest is excellent too, sets up the beautiful blow very well.

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Kristen Otto 18 July 2006

Oh what a nice poem. I think I know who this is about, lol. Love You, keep up the good writes. -Kristen

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