I Woke Up Comments

You did not wake up too late, thank goodness. It was all 'smoke and mirrors' after all.

It seems good awakening. At a time proper. Well written piece Luz..10+

I can't deny it, I had fun while it lasted, I enjoyed the ride But I can no longer be there, for I've downed the red pill I need the brutal truth and reality, my freedom, my peace For all the said, unsaid, for all I did or failed to do, I apologize Is not that I didn't love you It's that I woke up...fine poem...10+++++++++++++ vote

marvelous piece to self realise how we sleeep when we rise and then how others sleep when we don't rise ma'am kindly spare time to read my two bestest as they ALL say poems MOMS SMILES AND MOTHERS DAY TODAY THANKS WHENEVER U CAN U may

Sometimes we become a slave in love and when we woke up? Read the peace of freedom in the poem by Luz Hanaii. The poem may bring peace of freedom to you.

A refined poetic imagination, Luz. You may like to read my poem, Love And Iust. Thank you.

It was all good, till your mask dropped off But I can no longer be there, for I've downed the red pill I need the brutal truth and reality, my freedom, my peace.. a definite decision and the power and consequences of such a decision............ a decison for peace and freedom from a relationship which was all a lie. thank u. dear poetess. tony

It seems to be about a celeb needing peace, solitude and freedom from the camera. You expressed superbly in a unique poem. Kudos. Do Pleez read mine too.

Luz, such a splendid remarkable poem👍👍👍

TWO: A most beautiful, most sensitive poem, created with much care and love. Be sure, love needs not to be explained....at all. God knows our hearts, minds and souls.His Love is immensely, endlessly and we look up to His Love. I read this Beauty time and again and it is growing in beauty more and more. Such a most beautiful emotive poem. Thank you for sharing A 10+++++++ and much more for the vote. To MyPoemList this beauty!

ONE: Such most sensitive lines and words, the most beautiful but very sad are the two last lines, I cite here: Is not that I didn't love you It's that I woke up............................................This is metaphorically uttered/ worded............WOW! You must know that with LOVE, WE NEED NEVER APOLOGIZE, Love is the WORD to feel comfortable, and IF you still have the emotions or the URGE to say I APOLOGIZE, no this is not the way to do......I reckon