Friday, March 21, 2008

I Witness A Raven Comments

Rating: 4.3

When the moonlight fractures the patterned frost,
in fragments chiseled into the glass,
shattering and refracting its battery
of light, in silent solace through my window,
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Caroline Misner
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Fay Slimm 25 October 2008

Caroline this had me in it's grip from beginning to end - your poetic choices are really good and your imagery shines. I intend to take this one with me in my favourites and wish I could give you more than ten..... keep up this style of writing, you have a great talent for it..... my fondest wishes from Fay.

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