Thursday, November 29, 2018

I Wished Upon A Star Tonight Comments

Rating: 5.0

I wished upon a star tonight
That your future would be bright
A respite from a past of pain,
And you'd have cause to smile again
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Louis Rams 30 November 2018

this was like an arrow straight to the heart (touchng)

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Practicing Poetess 30 November 2018

Hope that arrow went in nice and easy, Louis! : -) Thanks for commenting!

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Carl Roussell 30 November 2018

Hoping for a friend to have experience a better life - one of the best reasons for wising upon a star - a 10

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Practicing Poetess 30 November 2018

Thank you so much, Carl! Your appreciation is valued tremendously. : -)

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Kevin Patrick 30 November 2018

If all the stars were made of gold, they would not shine as bright as this poem gives them credence for, a soothing and enchanting work, who ever the individual is who has earned your love as provided us, the readers, a lovely poem.

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Practicing Poetess 30 November 2018

Kevin, what a sweet and incredible comment! Thank you for making my day! : -)

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Flower Prince 29 November 2018

Such a starry poem that motivates and gives glee! Nice sharing Practicing Poetess! Not less than 10.

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Practicing Poetess 29 November 2018

Thank you so much, Flower Prince! : -)

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Kumarmani Mahakul 29 November 2018

Night star will dazzle with bright light. Night star will shine with beauty of self dignity. Wishing for brightness to twinkle is a great aspect of human life. An interesting poem is very beautifully penned.10

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Practicing Poetess 29 November 2018

Thank you very much, Kumar! Blessings to you! : -)

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