Tuesday, September 8, 2009

I Wished I Pray To Everything Comments

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I wished I pray to everything
When I saw trees, branches, leaves, root
I pray they can get happiness
When I saw stones, sand, soil
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Catrina Heart 18 September 2009

A noble poem from a humble heart.......praise worthy....10+++

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Ravi A 13 September 2009

The entire poem can be condensed into a single line: - 'I pray for the entire world for peace and happiness'.

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Lynda Robson 11 September 2009

May all your prayers come true, nice sentiments Ahmad 10 Lynda xx

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Sonya Florentino 10 September 2009

we need all the prayer we can get especially in these trying times.... You might want to change your first line to I wish I could pray for everything The last line I don't get....

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Chitra - 10 September 2009

a noble message embedded in these lines..Mother Nature is our super hub of protection and we too should protect Her rather than destroy Her

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Aijaz Asif 09 September 2009

I wish all your wishes you pray for be fullfilled.....ameen very beautiful write indeed, thanks for sharing 10+++ rgds asif

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Seema Chowdhury 09 September 2009

ramadan Mubarak. thanks for sharing this beautiful poem in the form of a prayer.

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Christina Phan 09 September 2009

this one was beautiful and fanastic job 10+++ kept it up

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I felt the main message that came out of this carefully composed and skilfully written poem is that nature deserves so much love and prayers and I feel should not be disturbed so much from human beings. Mother Nature knows how to balance and revere nature and we should thank God that we have natural beauty on this planet. I loved this poem Ahmad. 10 Karin Anderson

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Nithya Raghavan 09 September 2009

the poem was beautiful..i only hope that every one of us can be thoughtful enough to pray for every living or non-living thing that we come across. keep it up!

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Indira Babbellapati 09 September 2009

i think instinctively all of us are patheistic...

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Louis Rams 08 September 2009

if all your prayers were to be answered, this world would be a better place because the way it looks now, it is a total disgrace. man has destroyed all that GOD has given. and this is what they call living? your prayers as well as your poem, both deserve a ten.

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Ruth Walters 08 September 2009

mother nature looks after us all in her own way and so we should all worship and look after mother nature instead of destroying the planet.... Ruthy

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Juan Carlos Abeti 08 September 2009

beautiful one, well expressd, love for nature and humanity great i wish life was that simple a pleasure to read your work, thanks.

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Marieta Maglas 08 September 2009

I like these two anaphoras: ''I wished I pray to everything'' ''Although they pray much than me' Wonderful abstract poem, lovely to read............10+++

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Almedia Knight-Oliver 08 September 2009

A thoughtful poem of prayer for all things in the universe...I pray that all your poems wishes are received.

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Bob Blackwell 08 September 2009

A fine tribute to the power of prayer.

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Joseph Poewhit 08 September 2009

Captures the many things we take as everyday, and brings them into focus as GODS wonderment of creation. - meaningful poem

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Obinna Eruchie 08 September 2009

It is thoughtful to show great concern for peace around the globe, and may we may be touched to work together to make it happen.

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Shalini Sundararamalingam 08 September 2009

a very nice wishing prayer, may your wishes come true.

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