Saturday, August 6, 2016

I Wished Comments

Rating: 4.0

I wished on someday
If i saw her
I would stop her and tell her
Do you have twenty years from your time
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Khairul Ahsan 29 September 2020

A sweet wish! Hope it comes true!

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Me Poet Yeps Poet 26 December 2018

only 20 I have given more than 50

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Crayon Poet 14 August 2018

Nothing is larger than love, is what your lines say to me. I agree with them!

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Lungelo S Mbuyazi 02 July 2018

A loud poem....It leaves a reader eager to learn more...10

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Ramona Gerry 02 January 2017

Beautiful poem! Thanks for sharing it.

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Menato San 26 January 2017

thanks for your comment

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Tom Allport 27 December 2016

a poem of regrets and if only

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Tom Allport 27 December 2016

time is short so it should be used wisely with no regrets

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Menato San 26 January 2017

thanks for your nice comment

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Christina Simmons 27 December 2016

Tells the story of someone pinning for his sweetheart! ? Short and sweet.

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Edward Kofi Louis 27 December 2016

If i saw her! Thanks for sharing this poem with us.

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Menato San 26 January 2017

thank you for reading

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Kim Barney 27 December 2016

Short and sweet. Congrats on poem of the day!

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Menato San 26 January 2017

thank you so much my friend

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Bernard F. Asuncion 27 December 2016

SIncere poetry+++++++++++++++++++++++ congrats on being selected for the day+++++++++++++++

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Menato San 26 January 2017

thank you sir for your comment

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Sarah Mkhonza 20 October 2016

I love the simplicity of this poem. You use the question so well. It makes us think of the beginning of a relationship and how two people need to commit in the time together. A lot is left unsaid, which is good. Thanks

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Menato San 26 January 2017

thanks for youe lovely words

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Anil Kumar Panda 20 October 2016

Very honest expression of love. Thanks for sharing.

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Menato San 26 January 2017

thanks for u comment

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S.zaynab Kamoonpuri 01 October 2016

Wow short n sweet n an imaginative stylish way of expressin luv eh. Thumbs up. Yor love Wud love it! Pls do review my latest poem too called poetry commentary.....

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Menato San 26 January 2017

thank you lunar, I would love to read you poems

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Edward Kofi Louis 01 September 2016

How much i love you! Thanks for sharing.

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Rose Kanana 29 August 2016

Nothing feels more defeating than unexpressed emotions...nice piece

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Menato San 26 January 2017

thank you so much Rose

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Uzezi Ologe 19 August 2016

love not not expressed, not shared...kills a man quicker that a speeding bullet. Nice! I like this

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Menato San 26 January 2017

you are right.thanks

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Sister Frances 18 August 2016

It has a lovely honesty to it and it's become one of my favorites.

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Menato San 19 August 2016

Thank you, i appreciate that

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Lofy San 10 August 2016

Nice one man Thanks for sharing

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Menato San 11 August 2016

Thanks

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Sasanka Sekhar Panda 06 August 2016

A strong and passionate expression of love Menato 10. Please read my poems also and give commemnts.

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Menato San 06 August 2016

Thank you sir, and i will love to read your poems

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