I wished on someday
If i saw her
I would stop her and tell her
Do you have twenty years from your time
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Nothing is larger than love, is what your lines say to me. I agree with them!
Tells the story of someone pinning for his sweetheart! ? Short and sweet.
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I love the simplicity of this poem. You use the question so well. It makes us think of the beginning of a relationship and how two people need to commit in the time together. A lot is left unsaid, which is good. Thanks
Wow short n sweet n an imaginative stylish way of expressin luv eh. Thumbs up. Yor love Wud love it! Pls do review my latest poem too called poetry commentary.....
Nothing feels more defeating than unexpressed emotions...nice piece
love not not expressed, not shared...kills a man quicker that a speeding bullet. Nice! I like this
It has a lovely honesty to it and it's become one of my favorites.
A strong and passionate expression of love Menato 10. Please read my poems also and give commemnts.
A sweet wish! Hope it comes true!