I Wish Comments

.........I love this poem from beginning to end, adding to my favorites :) ★

Overall Wonderful...! ! the last three i loved the most.. your imagination is awesome... I Wish your wishes come true Thats my ultimate wish for you

Great structure a, a, b, b, b. Really helps the poem flow and I loved your words. Andrew x

Wonderfully written, flowed like a gentle stream.You're amazing! Have you heard the song called 'IF I WAS' by Midge Ure, Love Duncan

Great message Ernestine. I sense that there's a real fighter in you! Sincerely, Mary