Thursday, February 28, 2008
I Wish You Were Here Comments
Rating: ★3.5
Babe I wish you were here
to hold me in your arms make everything
feel right
Give me comfort
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Jay Boyd
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Ianne De Angel
02 December 2008
That's a really nice poem. But it's not that deep. Try to make them better, I think you will get it. It's really basic, it doesn't seem as a deep work. Try some. I'm sorry if I hurt you with this comment. ^^
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7/25/2025 6:08:12 PM # 1.0.0
thats so very sweet... you deserve better...thats what love is though make up and break up