Thursday, February 28, 2008

I Wish You Were Here Comments

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Babe I wish you were here
to hold me in your arms make everything
feel right
Give me comfort
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Jay Boyd
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Mrs.Joseph =) 21 August 2009

thats so very sweet... you deserve better...thats what love is though make up and break up

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very nice, good write.

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Ianne De Angel 02 December 2008

That's a really nice poem. But it's not that deep. Try to make them better, I think you will get it. It's really basic, it doesn't seem as a deep work. Try some. I'm sorry if I hurt you with this comment. ^^

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