I Wish You To Always Feel Comments

This poem is my favourite that you've written yet! please write more! 10++

riding on tornadoes and feeling the sun...wow!

lets ride upon tornado continuing our hopes. that you would take the hand of another in flight is really dynimite. good dedication again

wonderful job im speechless so nothing else too say 10+

good good good i running out of words here.

when i look at your sun i see the beauty of your poetry in it...happy because it is up in the sky and won't decend as i said in my poem about you.......

lovely small poem.......

lovely small poem.......

A nice love poem vivid and succicnt......lovely!

well, this is a nice piece again...am sure she likes this..