Saturday, May 17, 2014

I Wish We Were Back Comments

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I promised I would change,
But I broke that promise too.
From deep down my heart I say,
I never meant to hurt you.
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Sneha Celine
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Nalini Jyotsana Chaturvedi 06 September 2014

U and I sailing in the same boat....u penned. My hurts. I wish you did not have to go through all this. Beautifully written

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Akhtar Jawad 27 May 2014

I say what an Urdu poet says, Muhabbat keya hay taseere muhabbat kisko kahte hayn Tera majboor kar dena mera majboor ho jana. Kirti has advised you but i shall not. The poem is nice.

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Kirti Sharma 17 May 2014

Changin for someone whom you love is justified.... But changing for someone who doesn't care is not... I hope you get what you wish... Great work!

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