I Wish We Never Met Comments

sounds like something I'm going thru! very sad poem.

You have expressed well your pain, agony and heartbreak over one who does not deserve your tears. Love has a tendency to cause heartache and heartbreak when it is not true, and when we seek for something to fill an emptiness deep within, we will always find the wrong one to share it with. Only suggestion I have to enhance this, would be to use punctuation where it is needed, i.e. id should be I'd and of course when referring to self, a capital I seems to read better. Otherwise well done. Many blessings to you