Thursday, May 7, 2015

I Wish We Could Be Together Comments

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I wish we could be together,
Creating a past we'll recall
When the Author says 'It's all over,
The final curtain's about to fall'
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Lora Colon
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Akachukwu Lekwauwa 02 June 2015

the longing is very deep..well expressed. Nice piece of poetry. Please i invite you to read my work. Thanks

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Jak Black 09 May 2015

A lovely poem, Lora. You are reaching out for someone to love, reaching out from the depths of your heart. Some beautiful lines here........I just want to inhale your essence, Just once to know the thrill of your touch........................If it were etched on Heaven's scroll, All the pain and sorrow would depart. Great job.

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Rishad Mk 07 May 2015

Excellent love poem! Beautiful poetic words.

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Lora Colon

Lora Colon

Missouri - United States
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