Sunday, September 20, 2020

I Wish Today Comments

Rating: 5.0

I wish you a smooth sailing
on paths ripe with glee
no turbulence of thoughts
swelling to make your hopes flee
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Nosheen Irfan
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Unnikrishnan E S 19 November 2020

The expression of solemn love complemented by subtle rhyme scheme makes the poem beyond par. Steals the reader’s heart.

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Kostas Lagos 20 September 2020

A lovely poem! Heartwarming!

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Sylvia Frances Chan 20 September 2020

1. Heartwarming wish from a dearest one to her lover, hoping that the time they missed unseen would be as ever before. 2. A sweet tender poem for a best friend who temporarily said goodbye and who she love dearly, with the great hope that her love for him be continued again when he will return 3. An excellent metaphored poetry for a cherished lover. Five Stars. Enjoyed very much

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Dr Dillip K Swain 20 September 2020

An endearing piece of work... fascinating expression! Happy to read your poem after a long gap. Top score!

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M Asim Nehal 20 September 2020

What a wish for all your friends and dear ones, nothing can be better than this wish, May your wish come true and everyone including you live in peace and happiness. Aameen, Welcome back......

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Bernard F. Asuncion 20 September 2020

A well written poem. Truly delightful ...5stars++

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Nosheen Irfan

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