Friday, September 30, 2011

I Wish This Turns True Comments

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One night I dreamt of something which was just so right
To my surprise, I saw u as my knight
Suddenly the morning sun was shining bright
With you assuring me that you’ll make the things all right.
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Jinal Oswal
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The 4am Poet Worm 19 October 2011

beautiful sentiments... in prayer wriiten for a Knight/King.... :)

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Jacqui Broad 13 October 2011

Love is great. Makes you feel high. Makes you feel low. After reading your beautiful poem, I also wish it to be true...

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Unwritten Soul 30 September 2011

Nice day is waiting for you Jinal, you tell loud, free and proud...it really make this poem sound so cheerful, keep writing and i think you smiling when thinking this dream..Good work Jinal_Unwritten SOul

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