I Wish That You Were Old And Withered(For Junie) Comments

And so, I collect antiques...not the flashy new but the treasured old, lovingly cared for for a lifetime...and so I wish Junie could be for you...lovingly cared for for a lifetime, not always remembered as fresh and new. Scarlett

And the end is unexpected and brilliant!

Nice old treasures brought by the rising tide by the ocean of your poems. This one is so passionate... I like it very much. You make something old to look more precious. You are a poet in heart, Donall, no doubts!

Your endings are always unexpected, : P Great poem.