I Wish That Favours Were Returned Comments

I was feeling the emotions you describe in your poem and then read the words of Sai Baba: those who ask for love in return are coolies demanding wages Yet it is our nature to want love returned

Those whom watch they see eyes are every where...you have it going on I say...Thank you..

Wow. I loved this. I dunno. Its weirdly superb =] D.P x

I don't know why pple get so shocked when young pple show talent and insight in their writing like you have. I'm always doing thankless favors, I know just what you mean. Lovely poem, Aden. X's and O's

Aden, you have good writing talent. Keep up the fine work....! ! ! Regards, Trade.

Such discourteous behaviour of others do disturb young minds-a short and impressive poem.

Good poem. You express how we all feel. Keep writing. You're doing great.

Good poem. You express how we all feel. Keep writing. You're doing great.

Good poem. You express how we all feel. Keep writing. You're doing great.

Good poem. You express how we all feel. Keep writing. You're doing great.