Tuesday, January 17, 2006

I Wish She Were Mine Comments

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I gaze at her from a distance
I have no resistance
As she walks past I think to myself man she's fine
Then I get I glance from behind
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Trey Shipman L
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Cat Lam 19 January 2006

Trey, what are you waiting for? Make her yours, this is 2006, time to make some moves...lol. This was a nice write, I enjoyed.

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B. Pursley 19 January 2006

nice, I know that feeling

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Aj Whitten 18 January 2006

very nice trey. i didnt think you had it in you

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Neisha Williams 18 January 2006

This poem is very sweet, Trey. It has an almost musical quality about it. Very nicely done.

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