I Wish It Comments

Intriguing and thought provoking. I like it. stan brierly58 minutes ago Keep writing and sharing.

Comprehensive SarahKnova Woods53 minutes ago I really like the first stanza even though it has a rhyme. I am not the biggest fan of rhyming; but you made it work in this first stanza :) Maybe in second one put make (a) sincere offer? The entire piece reminds me of being in love and knowing YOU will always be there for that person but they are in this case just not able to share that level of love you have for them. Reminds me of the first time I fell in love and life slowly putting me through many painful years and tears; nights up drinking far too much and writing about the pain of why would this person not see how deeply I cared for them. Thank you for sharing :) Comment +1

Aw! Destined to be! Abigail Foster57 minutes ago Very nice, I like the message.

Call me from far I shall emerge as star