I wish I were the tear falling from your eye
Gliding down your cheek
Sensing your skin
Soaking up a kiss
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so nice...what a beautiful desire.... to be that to someone...
How I wish I were the tear falling from your eye For at least I would have the company of- Your cheek, your skin, your kiss, your chin I wish I were the tear falling from your eye But even these wishes are dry. What is impossible it is found possible thro' your poem.
hey preeti.. i liked this 1.. u too r quite good wid words.. :)
Preeti, this reads like a tear from heaven... great write! ! Brian
this. is. friggin'. AMAZING. a different take on your average sad love poem. i love the image of being the tear on one's cheek. its perfect. i love this poem to death. :)
I love this poem doll. I love the title. Its so sensual in a sad way. Beatiful.
This is a fine piece of work, a soulful and sorrowful piece of which I can totally relate emotionally.
I love this drop-down style of yours.... let's call it a ''drop-down style'' of writing poems..... good try and marvelous results.... I pray you have evaporated from the puddle of sorrow... we all wish you would and fly in the clouds....
my my somebody is sad today! ! ! ...new style? ...reads great...sometimes when you dont think of rhyme you get the right mood into the poem...you worked up the mood quite well...a ten for the new style...love...nalini
Hey Preeti...This is a departure from your usual ones....and a good one: -)
You found the right words to express your emotions!