Sunday, July 16, 2006

I Wish I Were The Tear Falling From Your Eye Comments

Rating: 3.4

I wish I were the tear falling from your eye
Gliding down your cheek
Sensing your skin
Soaking up a kiss
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Bharati Nayak 18 March 2024

You found the right words to express your emotions!

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Ferdinand Maniraguha 04 January 2016

dry of words, you are a great poet

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Moon Batchelder 31 August 2006

so nice...what a beautiful desire.... to be that to someone...

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Rajaram Ramachandran 28 August 2006

How I wish I were the tear falling from your eye For at least I would have the company of- Your cheek, your skin, your kiss, your chin I wish I were the tear falling from your eye But even these wishes are dry. What is impossible it is found possible thro' your poem.

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Asma Bahrainwala 28 August 2006

hey preeti.. i liked this 1.. u too r quite good wid words.. :)

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Brian Dorn 16 August 2006

Preeti, this reads like a tear from heaven... great write! ! Brian

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Lesa K 02 August 2006

Absolutely beautiful. Very sad tribute to a great love.

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Gina PrettyBrownEyes 29 July 2006

this. is. friggin'. AMAZING. a different take on your average sad love poem. i love the image of being the tear on one's cheek. its perfect. i love this poem to death. :)

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I love this poem doll. I love the title. Its so sensual in a sad way. Beatiful.

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William Jackson 27 July 2006

This is a fine piece of work, a soulful and sorrowful piece of which I can totally relate emotionally.

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Grace Hays 24 July 2006

very sweet and sentimental...i love it...keep up the good work

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Catastrophe King 24 July 2006

I love this drop-down style of yours.... let's call it a ''drop-down style'' of writing poems..... good try and marvelous results.... I pray you have evaporated from the puddle of sorrow... we all wish you would and fly in the clouds....

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Nalini Hebbar 16 July 2006

my my somebody is sad today! ! ! ...new style? ...reads great...sometimes when you dont think of rhyme you get the right mood into the poem...you worked up the mood quite well...a ten for the new style...love...nalini

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Sujata V 16 July 2006

Lovely poem Preeti. You brought out the regret very well! Sujata

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Ray Forever 16 July 2006

Hey Preeti...This is a departure from your usual ones....and a good one: -)

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