Sunday, February 8, 2009

I Wish I Was A Donut Comments

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I wish I was a donut,
And got eaten everyday.
I could stick on someone’s fingers,
Squishy testy like cookie dough,
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Mrs. Cynosure
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Aijaz Asif 14 February 2009

lol...very lovely write indeed which water'd my mouth, I wonder what donut it wouuld be; p....i like the way of your writting different, anyways thanks 10 rgds asif

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Viola Grey 08 February 2009

haha....is this why you are so sweet...I have to admit, I don't eat donuts, so you are safe with me around...sometimes ;) ....this is a neat one Becca.

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Sia Reis 08 February 2009

Wou! Hats off to you your great poem and a great imagination. Yes, after reading this I wish to be a Donut too.

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Stacey Watts 08 February 2009

Gee what do I want to be when I grow up? I never thought of ever a donut. Quite an fun imagination you have. 10

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