I Wish I Said That Earlier Comments

perfect zaynab i like that poem, there's much love and longing for your beloved you deserve 10, keep it up

It holds some warmth behind those words, kinda reminds me of a past love...

A wonderful heart you have! So enjoyed your poem; D

will it is a song so no big deal, and thnx for reading it

there's something interesting in this one, it is written like it is some kind of a song. We can even hear the tune. Nice job. Just pay attention to the repetitions, I know you are doing it on purpose but you have to find another way to repeat your ideas and just by rewriting the same lines

oh that's so better one oh my feeling

tnx for ur nice feelings and for this beautiful words that really shows big emotions, wide imagination and a lovely heart