Friday, February 24, 2006
I Wish I Made You Smile Comments
Rating: ★4.3
looking past the trees
into the summer skies
not a hint of a cloud
in your brilliant blue eyes.
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John Kipling Lewis
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Kath Moore
05 November 2007
3. Obvious forced rhymes 'skies/eyes', 'friend/end, ' etc, cliches, telliness, and not one original image. It's just bad.
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Brian Beek
05 November 2007
wow...this one is amazing....it was just the right length and it flowed very well.
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9/10/2025 5:08:09 PM # 1.0.0
This poem is a masterpiece john