Friday, November 21, 2014

I Wish I Have Loved Someone Who Never Loved Me Comments

Rating: 5.0

I wish I have loved someone who never loved me,
I wish I have seen someone who never cared me,
I only recognize and know him from behind,
To me ignorant rather too careless too unkind,
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Akhtar Jawad
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Dr Dillip K Swain 13 August 2022

A wonderful poem sir, extremely well written. Top score and to my favourite! !

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Charity Nduhiu 17 April 2015

At least his hate won't result in tears. Please be strong there is life ahead. Nice piece

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Savita Tyagi 24 November 2014

I sense many emotions in this poem. Written beautifully. We want to love all but not able to. More than that we want to be loved by people around us. Some time that doesn't happen either! These sentiments expressed by your pen are simply touching. Thank you for sharing.

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Kirti Sharma 22 November 2014

I shall say I love you shall not wait for the fate, I know his respond will be nothing but hate... no words....

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Valsa George 21 November 2014

Those who are rejected by others need our love more and if one is large hearted enough to love a man who hates him, it is a wonderful gesture! It is what Jesus exhorted.....' Love your enemies'! Your largesse of heart is reflected through these lines!

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Marieta Maglas 21 November 2014

Narrates love tails of his youth that are lies, Could not move on earth but claims the skies, -beautiful lines

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