Thursday, May 22, 2014

I Wish I Had Died Too Comments

Rating: 0.0

I wish I had died too
I wish I had died on a mystery plane from Malaysia
Carrying over 200 souls yet to live
Their last beautiful moments
...
Read full text

COMMENTS
* Sunprincess * 30 May 2014

............you penned this one so well....I could almost believe this is truly what happened...so sad to have your whole life ahead of you....then suddenly it's all over.....this is a terrific write...keep penning...

0 0 Reply
Colleen Courtney 27 May 2014

Wow. An interesting point of view on what may or may not have been. I find it sad though that this would be a persons wish. I only hope if these are your true feelings that maybe somehow you can find a glimpse of something, anything to make your life worth continuing. Because you do matter. You write incredible poetry. Maybe continuing on this path will you find a new pipurpose?

0 0 Reply
Juan Olivarez 22 May 2014

Strange wish. And not knowing what really happened you write a good account.

0 0 Reply
Gajanan Mishra 22 May 2014

good writing, thanks. Please read my poems and say something.

0 0 Reply
Joyce wolayo

Joyce wolayo

uganda
Close
Error Success