Wednesday, May 30, 2012

I Wish I Had Been Born A Bird...[personal; Birds; Humor] Comments

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My parents were both humans, so I am human too,
but I'd wish to be a bird, if I could be born anew.
Though I 'love' birds, you may think my wish absurd.
But more absurd wishes I'm sure you have heard.
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Bri Edwards
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Rajaram Ramachandran 17 July 2017

Birds live for a few years only whereas man can live till 100 years. Man has 6 senses while birds have only 2 or 3 senses. Birds go by their instincts but human beings go by their power of choice, good or bad. Yet your poem is nicely composed.

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Sutputra Radheye 15 July 2017

I liked it. I liked a lot. I found it like a your desire to be free and experience the freedom that a bird experiences. God bless.

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Wes Vogler 04 December 2015

nICE READ bRI TA AN 8 ***Caps Lock aaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaahh

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