I Wish, I Could Fly Comments

(cont.) it seems obvious that English is not your 'first language'. i shall not offer advice now, being quite busy with other things, but feel free to ask me questions. only one suggestion now: (from your 'bio') MY BELIEVES... i'd use MY BELIEFS. what is your 'first language'? i'll put this in my November showcase on PH, featuring poems by poets of the Indian subcontinent. Thanks. ;) p.s. one more 'suggestion': take the comma out of the title

i read your PH bio. nice. i doubt that your PH picture is a photo, but it is cute. i enjoyed this poem & send to MyPoemList. often i give suggestions on how to 'improve' one's English; even MINE could be improved! (cont.)