Wednesday, November 12, 2008

I Wish I Could Be... Comments

Rating: 5.0

I wish I could be eagle flying high with little care of life.
I wish I could be lion furious
Or tiger running light with little care of life.
I wish I could be rustic child forever,
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sophia hayyat
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Menime Soul..'d' Ugliloner 02 February 2010

Meaning behind those words are so good.. I took a look into your poems and really most of them are soo good. I like it..You really write well. Keep it up! !

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Afzal Shauq 23 July 2009

I wish I could be man manly dominating all alive, I wish I could be magician turning everything what I like With little care of life. what a sweet fantasy type thought... really sweetly written poem with professional way... the verses are done right.. composition of words is rich and a rhythm is found... well done.. inspiring piece is this one too 10/10

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Billy Joe Collins 12 November 2008

draws to the point of being alive, to me not being alive lets the others win don't let the others win good poem

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