Monday, August 22, 2005

I Wish I Could Be Pretty Comments

Rating: 4.5

if I had a beautiful face,
eyes that you could not break away from
or lips that you couldn't help but kiss,
I know I’d have nothing to worry about.
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Lily Espinosa
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Edward Grey 23 August 2005

hey there, youf friendly neighbourhood critique. I have one question. Why not. You say you dotn have physical bueaty, or personality 'per say'. One you have controll over, the other you dont. You are what you choose to be, nothing more. you are not always nice, as you put it, you dont have to be, jsut most of the time. Make yourself waht you want to be.

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