I Wish I Could Be A Kite Comments

it has got a charm and light....to be a kite....like the wish every human has wings...

i like this poem the most from all your poems that i have seen so far...in an innocent way and with spontaneous flow of words, the poem is remarkable...it reminds me of one of the first poems i wrote, ' To be a Cloud '..well done.

Wonderful dream, Let us all be a bit more like a kite....

The feeling of freedom. A good poem

Very nice poem...i really love this...this is the best poem..i hv read, written by you....keep up the good work....a poem written in the spirit of william wordsworth....wandering lonely as a cloud....i wish i could be a kite....thanks for sharing+

ha haha a...mockery of mt everest......i liked it v much..... nice comparison... keep aiming high.....may ur life be like dat.... grt poem.. superb rhymes...

I know that feeling, the wish to fly, as a bird or in your case a kite, a freedom poem, just beautiful.

Painted the words with the hue of poetic imagination. Splendid! .

Really liked this poem! Well done!

Wow! ! ! A very nice topic indeed... I always dream of being a bird... flying high in the sky.. no limits its just you and no one else... And yes now a kite... I loved this poem.. feeling of independence...

Opening lines are beautiful. Poets like wind and sky now kites Good poem -KAVIN CHARALAN

I like your poem, I wish i could be a kite very nice interesting poem. While reading I was thinking that I am kite and I am flying in the sky.Keep it up. Now step by step i will read your poems and write good comments on them. Add me as a friend. Pls see my poems as well and I wrote one poem same on the topic of To Touch The Sky is also related on the topic of Kite. I have a big collection on my poems but I posted 6 of them. Pls read my poems & comment on them.

read 2 times, , great poem, , i can see every word.

I dont want to be propelled i dont want to be controlled I just want to sail in the laminar flow Without any hip hop and without any show, .................... very nice and admirable thought

kite.................beautiful one

Nice to be kite, to wander all spaces and height...it good to feel flying but not all times kite will satisfy you..when the string broken, you will lost to wrong place, and it hurt to fall, then never feel to surrender because once you surrender there's no way to wander the sky again...but if you still not to choose what to be, think it first because when we take a choice take a chance or hurt to get what you want..nice write Sharad thanks for inviting_Unwritten Soul

being a kite is actually very depressing, you can get cut, , , , , , , , , , , , , bazinga, just kidding, this poem is great, the very first line is my fav. Winds blowing swiftly to make them proud.nice thoughts.

GREAT WORK..... -SANU

this is really a inspirational poem... :))

This is my favorite poem of yours, good job!