I Wish I Could Comments

I wish I could open the valves of my heart And let the loveI harbor pour freely out And cleanse those wounds What an amazing poem what a breathtaking words!

Some good thoughts in this one. Read mine - Saturday Morning Mood - Adeline

I wish i could find the words to praise this poem...

This is a wonderful poem, the words dance so naturally with each other and create a lovely harmony. Good write and so true. My favorite lines But, I do not wish to undo what I have done Because from mistakes made I have also grown And struggled for wisdom that is essential To capacity for higher potential... Thank yo for sharing, ~Besa

nurture your gift, your writing is beautiful: D

Heart warming words! Your poem suggests that there is someone who feels for everyone.Beautiful poem!

only one comment - i love you truly, may god bless you with sound health with heartiest regards

only one comment - i love you truly, may god bless u with sound health, with heartiest regards

True Love is as much a fairytale as real. It's of both of what we dream of having. And when we have it sometimes we don't even know we do. A surreal feeling is that of true love. Just the words coming out of my mouth bring a feeling of happiness I have yet to feel. I think at one time I was their. But now its gone and I have nothing to which it compares. Some say your lucky if you even find it once. Going after seconds odds become astronomical of finding it yet again. Yet I continue the search knowing I might meet the futility of it. But I can't know what is in vain and what is not. So regardless I will always give this all I got. Some say it is certain but is it even after death. A loss of someone so young. A life so precious suddenly gone before you even get to experience its full potential. My question is how does grief effect true love?

we all need to make mistakes, so when we do get it right we know it's right. A great poem.