Thursday, July 17, 2008

I Wish For You (To Wake Up With Me) Comments

Rating: 3.5

I know you
your storming heart
with endless seeds
loving you
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cold september
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Ashley Hart 12 November 2008

it flows so smoothly. very nice poem.

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Ashraful Musaddeq 04 September 2008

A nice melodious verse.

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Tai Chi Italy 17 July 2008

This reminds me of a snow patrol song that lies with me and I reach and I too just forget the world and lie with the one I love, such a great song and thanks for this lovely poem in simultaneous response! Cold September, you are so cool, Thank you for making me a crying with sweet tears, Tai

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