I WISH
i could fly like a bird
i could set like the curd
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This was a beautiful poem a lot of meaning went into this... I WISH u good luck!
verrrry cute poem....loved the lines i could strike like a hammer i could polish my grammar... :)
well, not too bad for ur age :) i mean its lovely, dear. but most of all i liked about polishing ur grammar. i wish i could too, byeeeee
You know what Anushka, I still wish i could strike like a hammer i could polish my grammar Beautiful composition. ...10..
Just wishes and wishes. I have a lot too but to name a few, to be me and help encourage others to rise above the clouds. Thanks for your wishes and keep up wishing for you are a wishy poet that I have written as my poem but not yet in my site. I will put it there soon and will dedicate it to you.Keep it coming the sweet one.
Nice flow of words....you could be whater you want to be...God bless
I like the way this poem is set out and I like the idea of wanting to set like a curd. keep writing Anusshkaa. You have a flair for writing, well done.10/10.
yes you could...it's easy, all you have to do is to try....simple and nice write...keep it up and thanks for sharing 10 rgds asif
this is simply beautiful, sweetie. I love it.May all your wish will come true
Yes ma'am...you're getting there. Hope you're able to fulfill all your wishes.. Cheers. Subroto
beautiful and concised....write more...you have a wonderful flow
i liked the last line THE most....i could be whatever i want to be...... nicely written sweet poem...... cute little champ........err...princess....... ;)
'polish all your grammar' Trust me.. No one would be poets if we played by the rules.. kudos to ur effort 9/10
A matured poem for the age and may be for that reason you are cute princess Anusshkaa. The rhyming and the contents are sparkling. Very good verse. Liked it so much.