Thursday, July 23, 2009

I Wish Comments

Rating: 5.0

I WISH

i could fly like a bird
i could set like the curd
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cute little princess Anusshkaa
COMMENTS
Varanasi Ramabrahmam 29 August 2009

A matured poem for the age and may be for that reason you are cute princess Anusshkaa. The rhyming and the contents are sparkling. Very good verse. Liked it so much.

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Ernestina Benedicto 11 August 2009

This was a beautiful poem a lot of meaning went into this... I WISH u good luck!

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Sohini Pal (13yrs) 09 August 2009

verrrry cute poem....loved the lines i could strike like a hammer i could polish my grammar... :)

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Richard Post 07 August 2009

One day you gon be what u wanna bee

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Emma Adamyan 07 August 2009

well, not too bad for ur age :) i mean its lovely, dear. but most of all i liked about polishing ur grammar. i wish i could too, byeeeee

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Bhaswat Chakraborty 07 August 2009

You know what Anushka, I still wish i could strike like a hammer i could polish my grammar Beautiful composition. ...10..

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Aron Lelei 06 August 2009

Just wishes and wishes. I have a lot too but to name a few, to be me and help encourage others to rise above the clouds. Thanks for your wishes and keep up wishing for you are a wishy poet that I have written as my poem but not yet in my site. I will put it there soon and will dedicate it to you.Keep it coming the sweet one.

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Uriah Hamilton 05 August 2009

Very lovely, hope all your wishes come true.

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Indira Renganathan 05 August 2009

Nice flow of words....you could be whater you want to be...God bless

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Adi Cox 05 August 2009

I like the way this poem is set out and I like the idea of wanting to set like a curd. keep writing Anusshkaa. You have a flair for writing, well done.10/10.

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*~*happily desturbed*~* ? 05 August 2009

this is so cute. keep it up.10

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Mubeen Sadhika 05 August 2009

Your poem is also so cute. Loved it baby.

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Aijaz Asif 05 August 2009

yes you could...it's easy, all you have to do is to try....simple and nice write...keep it up and thanks for sharing 10 rgds asif

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Meggie Gultiano 05 August 2009

this is simply beautiful, sweetie. I love it.May all your wish will come true

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Identification Accepted 04 August 2009

short sweet and simple i loved it ^^

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Subroto Chatterjee 04 August 2009

Yes ma'am...you're getting there. Hope you're able to fulfill all your wishes.. Cheers. Subroto

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Samanyan Lakshminarayanan 04 August 2009

beautiful and concised....write more...you have a wonderful flow

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Shekhar Joshi 04 August 2009

i liked the last line THE most....i could be whatever i want to be...... nicely written sweet poem...... cute little champ........err...princess....... ;)

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Mystic Indian 04 August 2009

'polish all your grammar' Trust me.. No one would be poets if we played by the rules.. kudos to ur effort 9/10

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Bob Blackwell 04 August 2009

I hope all your wishes come true. lovely poem 10

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