Wednesday, July 12, 2006

I Wish Comments

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I wish I were the song
That comes to your mind when you are happy
I wish I were the comforting words
Of the song you sing when you are sad
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Mpho Petrus Manwedi
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Pia Andersson 13 August 2006

Reading your poem I thought to myself..this man he wished that he was everything and of course..the last line you wish just that...and excellent poem from you -Pia

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Dee Daffodil 01 August 2006

Wow...what a wonderful poem... Hugs, Dee

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Seán O' Muiriosa 12 July 2006

A lovely passionate declaration of love, beautiful!

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Mpho Petrus Manwedi

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