Wednesday, October 15, 2008

I Wish Comments

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I wish I never loved you
I wish I never cared
I wisd I didn't hurt you
I wish it wasn't fair
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Susannah Bryan
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Dillon Gay 16 October 2008

So simple, so cliched, but it looks like an effort was made. 'I Wish.' A powerful phrase. This poem is better off short so it can have a lasting effect. Great Job.

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