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Love is not a fairy tale...but i wish it was! May be love is temporary.....but still worth it, and beautiful too! You say you are not a writer....yet, you are a sweet poetess! .......10

Love is not love without pain and suffering. Better to have a cold heart and enjoy life. Nice poem. Loved it.

your original way is itself a fine poetry

A Heartfelt poem. " Raat to vaqt Ki paband hai dhal jayegi Dekhna ye hai charaaghoñ ka safar kitna hai." (Waseem Barelavi)

Love can be too painful...this poem is so good that it hurts

'Love is a fairy tale which looks nice in movies'.You're like a song, an animation, beautiful and temporary. You wrote beauiful and temporary...........even in the so called married life, love wanes in the course of time and familiarity. then i think and come to the conclusion love is a mystery. one who finds a lasting real love is a very happy man or a woman

Very heartfelt poem, RK