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Just beautiful... loved this endearing poem. Full marks.

Nicely composed wishes of a soul longing for freedom. Thanks for sharing.

Wonderfully composed and the yearning to be free comes out so heartfelt and dignified... No matter what country we live in... no matter what culture..... freedom is either curbed by law or by our neighbors and friends and family.... and sometimes by ourselves limiting ourselves.... This poem yearns like a bird yearns for the sky- -it is totally a heart on the wing

Your poem flows with the freedom that the speaker expresses a desire to achieve. I love the line 'I wish I could be free / In real as I am in dreams' And voila....she is! Freedom to express oneself through the poem is a great start. Thanks for sharing your poem.

It's pleasant to be free like nature but it's a pleasure to be a slave of love. A wonderful poem by Nosheen Irfan.

It is freedom that everyone craves for - freedom from limitations - to be perfect and whole. The craving ends when the realization that one is wholeness or fullness or perfection in reality dawns. But that is a long way away. Till then let us write beautiful poems like this one you have penned. (10)

You say I COULD BE FREE s-e-v-e-n time in this poem! If wishes had the power to fulfill themselves, this poem would be the blueprint of a happiest life. You are our Dream Keeper of hopes many have abandoned.

Wind flies clearly and fearlessly in the sky. No chains can enslave the soul. Water streams flow freely. Every sequence here in this poem declares about freedom. Freedom is the real right. An interesting poem is beautifully presented here.10

We long for freedom, but often we are chained emotionally and physically! Freedom can be enjoyed only if there are restrictions too, but not to the level of choking us! As far as desires are unchained, we can float free at least in thoughts! Enjoyed reading this whimsical write!

wishes are..wishes. we are chained. and we are not machines, so definitely we wish. is it still a blessing, that we are not bound not to wish, till now. beautiful poem and dream. some feelings like this.. read mine -a song-. humble invitation.

Hi Nosheen, A poem from Nosheen after many weeks. Beautifully expressed the desire for freedom from the shackles that bind the minds, and souls; the desire for freedom of thought, freedom of expression. : I wish I could be free As the cloud that kisses the sky Or the wind that fearlessly flies I wish I could be free Of the chains that enslave the soul Most passionate, very emotional. The choice of words, the rhythm, rhyme- inimitable. Everything generates lot of positive energy. This is a poem of positivity. Loved reading this exquisite piece. So, on to mypoems.. and a lofty 100++++

a wonderful poem expressing the freedom of body and bondage of soul. you have presented your themewith nice rhythm artistic dexterity. thanks for sharing such a beautiful poem.

Nicely written.. Desire for freedom at its fullest