Tuesday, September 19, 2017

I Wish Comments

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The labor of the day
And it's hardships
Inflicts wishes to one
For dawn to standby
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Caswell Sibiya
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Dr Antony Theodore 19 October 2018

I wish I could make you want me, Want me like I do. I wish I'd walk straight to you, And tell you how I feel... will you ever realize my love for you...... longings and hope in love relationship.. thank u dear for expressing your feelings. tony

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Caswell Sibiya 19 October 2018

Thank you Dr. Much appreciated.

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Alan Paulen 19 October 2018

Such a lovely and sad love poem I can fully relate. I fully agree with you keeping feelings inside only destroys you

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Caswell Sibiya 03 July 2018

Thanks for the inspiring comments, they sure fuel my passion for writing.

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Chinedu Dike 28 June 2018

Deep passionate feelings well articulated and nicely brought forth from the heart. Very heartfelt with strong emotions. Thanks for sharing Caswell and do remain enriched.

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Azisa 26 June 2018

Xem, I wish you were couregeous enough to stand up for your heart, Nice poem Mr TC Sibiya.

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