I wish your heart is as
Creamy as your body,
Would not mind being
Addicted to your sweetness
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THE POEM IS VERY BEAUTIFUL. I LIKE THE POEM FOR THE QUALITY OF SIMPLICITY AND LUCIDITY.THE THEME OF THE POEM IS UNIVERSAL AND ORIGINAL, I LIKE THE POEM AND THE POEM DESERVES 10/10.
Lerato le letle le bohlokwa.Lerato ke seikokotlelo la lefatshe.Ke motshepuwa wa lefatshe.Ha lerato le le siyo lefatshe le buswa ke mona, diqhwebeshano, ho se utlwane, merusu le manyofonyofo.O kgeleke ngwana monna.Tshwara jwalo Mosotho wa ka o tiise..
A lustful wish of love. Maybe it will be granted, maybe it will not. A poem in which a determination is sought. Somethings in this world just can't be bought. Tried and true through comes the thought. But still without an answer it is just a wish and only a wish. My prayers are with you in your search which has come due.
Love is always a beautiful thing... Your poem is a beautiful vision of love... Well done... Very nice write...
Wow! brother, love is in the air.Valentine is around the corner......great poem man!
Fantastic! So many... delightful passages expressed economically and yet with great force.Morena'...ka.O kgeleke.Congratulations and keep inviting me to read your great masterpieces.
I wish I got a girl so I can ask her to read thi s I wish poem lol love it
Beautiful poem indeed! Keep on telling us