Thursday, June 6, 2013

I Wish Comments

Rating: 5.0

I'm about to close my eyes
And take a trip to dreamland,
Where castles lasts for only a night,
Where joys and sorrows are short lived,
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Siyabonga A Nxumalo
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Zandile Zoya 30 July 2013

keep writting and i will keep on reading.

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Heather Wilkins 03 July 2013

so we can paint memories we'l never forget. excellent

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Heather Wilkins 03 July 2013

so we can paint memories we'll never forget. this is what love does. excellent

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David Wood 19 June 2013

Such romantic words, this is a god poem Siyabonga, well pened.

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Dee Corpolongo 10 June 2013

Very sensuous and loving, and a place I often escape to....dreamland. Excellent poem and place!

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Phiwe Mbatha 07 June 2013

Oh my, such romantic words. Lovely poem

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Valsa George 07 June 2013

Passions spilling over like a river in spate in the season of monsoon! !

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Farah Ilyas 07 June 2013

I wish I was so close to you, So I can whisper sweet nothings into your ears And let our bodies do the talking In a sincere silent manner....too romantic & lovely poem...liked it

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Elena Sandu 07 June 2013

Yes! The best comes last! Gaze into your lovely eyes! Beauty flowing to bring love enegy, thank you!

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S.zaynab Kamoonpuri 06 June 2013

Ah a lovely piece ful of dreamy romance! A fabulous poem sir! Thnx 4 yor latest coment.

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Neela Nath Das 06 June 2013

Heart warming fabulous write! Loved Siya this wonderful poem.

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Unwritten Soul 06 June 2013

Romantic writes, after so long resting you come with a beautiful poem again..keep it up and your emotion must keep flow in your paper..._Soul

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Divya Gupta 06 June 2013

Nice desire..and a nice pasionate poem.. Plz do read my poems :)

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Hazel Durham 06 June 2013

So sensual bursting with passion and desire in your dreamland where the magic of romance and love run free! Great write!

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Gajanan Mishra 06 June 2013

jungle of paradise and lovely eyes, thanks. I invite you to read my poems and comment.

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