I Wish….. Comments

Hey The innocense and longing of a daughter to have her parents by her side is well depicted in your words..I like the way with simplicity you said so much that most people write paragraphs explaining themselves.Keep the simplicity going it will take you to great heights in your life... -Me

‘It’s my birthday & I want to meet them & so I’m making a wish to die....’ ~ Poets die in imagination and your imagination is vivid/voidless…created gosh/gleam…but I don’t know man dies and become star…may be…poetic or religious faith…overall O’ Posy mind it Poets are immortal… thanks for sharing Regards Ms. Nivedita UK 10/10

Good one....I felt the love for the parents who truly deserve it.....but then life has to move on for the ones who are with us...

a truely beautiful poem.i like the way u just fall into your character - and write from different aspects and points of view.The ironic wish was a great twist for the ending :)

Trust in the Heavens and your hearts will be filled with the energy generated by the love between both of you and your parents, combined with the love of God. Love never dies.A lovely and memorable poem.10.

A poignant poem full with love for the parent! nicely penned. Thanks.

Anita Good poem, expressing the full love to the parents. Rgds Noor

Very nicely written, Anita

Hey Anita...What a poem! ! ! Marvelous...I can feel the pain in this writing... U r brilliant...How did u write this poem...i mean how did u feel.. I hope and I wish..with god's grace ur parents are with u...rite? ? Still...Fantastic write...10/10...

did your parents pass away my mom did and last year on her birthday i asked god to tell her to send me a sign that she still loved me and that nite i seen 4 fallen stars i couldnt believe it but i knew it was her a very powerful moment read my power of words its called (a child's pain) good poem