Tuesday, June 16, 2009

I Wish Comments

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I wish that I could get something that will last,
not some fling, not something fun,
something to last a lifetime.
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mikayla carpenter
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Mandi Hayden 30 June 2009

Hi Mikayla, you are a very talented poet, also I too write from life experience. this poem is probably how I felt before I left my husband, I won't go into details but I now have a happy life, and after thinking that I too would always just 'wish' I got my wish, and he is wonderful, Don't wish your life away honey...you have so many years in front of you (I know things are very hard for you) but you have had strength this far.....don't give up on a happy future Mandi: -)

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Michael Nkwocha 29 June 2009

nice write up. the one thing taht truly lasts forever is GOD.

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'something to last a lifetime'... an utopia for Poets Regards dr sakti. 23.06.09. India

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