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How can such profound feelings go unnoticed? Love is indeed selfless.

i can feel your emotions here, dear Shweta. very expressive write! : -)

great expression of feelings of love

'But if u can't understand my silence.. how wud u understand my words...' profound lines! speaks a lot!

love is a double edged sword.................

love feelings sincere expressed in sweet selective words...good write...10

a blank look from a man should'nt be a surprise...may be we have more muscles on our face...th final line is filled with love...unconditional

waw............i loved ur poem....love means to give and it teach us how to sacrifice...no matter wht the other side thinks of u....we should always keep our selves strong....and i think care is the only way tht connect u with ur loved ones....good write..keep writing..