I Wish Comments

Pathetic

We are here for you Kee, me...and not only me but all you see...here...you wish comes true now :)

The desire for having a friend to live and share is so beautifully brought out with ease and care.

Really liked this poem, so well written....

very nice words for a friend...hope my friends felt this words too...nicely done..

'She may like to dive there' Rachel Ann Butler

This is sooooooooo cute!

your poem... so sweet like honey in my tears makes me happy.... i love to read it more dearly.... you make my day... thank you my friend... a 10 + SO GOOD

Love the ending... beautiful work.

This poem has great possibilities as a song. With the right melody, it could belong to R & B. Very Nice.

and ur there to find ur friend in desire, and u deserve for the work done -really superb i would like, thanks sharing, ---weish u all the best to ur quest...

true friends are real and rare treasures. hope u find that true friend....

A true friend is certainly a gift from God, to wish for such a friend shows you have a lot of feeling and a great deal of love to offer. I hope your wish comes true and you find exactly what you want in a friend. God Bless Melvina

'i never like to a river she may like to dive there she may die there' this is a perfect vision and it brings deep inspiration, what a very good wish!

your wish is very strong here

Great poem showing how you wish to find a soul mate! xoxox Francesca

That was a really good poem, great work, ] Rissa: -)

We often wish to have a very good friend, and it is still very difficult to make our dreams true.I am wondering, why. Perhaps it is because our wishes concern ideal friendship... And people are never ideal. I like your poem - it shows desires of our hearts.

Is this a friend you want, or more? ! Great poem though.....keep up the great work! Dona

Kee, I like the positive aspect and hope you introduce in this poem. I enjoyed it.