I Wish Poem by Thampi KEE

I Wish

Rating: 3.0


I wish
I will have a friend
With me to my dreams
With me to pray
With me to....drink

Not like to a mad
Not let me to mad....

I never like to read,
Never like to sing songs...
She may be with me to work
She may be with me to my dreams



She may be like to a child
she may be like to a wild.....

I never hate to your love
I never hate to my God

I never like to a river
she may like to dive there
she may die here

COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Rachel Butler 03 November 2009

'She may like to dive there' Rachel Ann Butler

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Bele Lele 29 July 2009

This is sooooooooo cute!

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Antonio Liao 17 October 2008

your poem... so sweet like honey in my tears makes me happy.... i love to read it more dearly.... you make my day... thank you my friend... a 10 + SO GOOD

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Namita Krishnamurthy 20 December 2007

Love the ending... beautiful work.

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Jemarie Ragudo 29 October 2007

This poem has great possibilities as a song. With the right melody, it could belong to R & B. Very Nice.

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Tiffany Tucks 29 October 2020

Pathetic

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Unwritten Soul 22 August 2016

We are here for you Kee, me...and not only me but all you see...here...you wish comes true now :)

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Rekha Mandagere 31 May 2015

The desire for having a friend to live and share is so beautifully brought out with ease and care.

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Mallika Achuthan Menon 05 August 2014

Really liked this poem, so well written....

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Lady Grace 26 March 2010

very nice words for a friend...hope my friends felt this words too...nicely done..

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