Thursday, September 18, 2008

'I Wish' Comments

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I wish you are my girl,
you got me going crazy girl.

I wish I can hug you, to make you feel
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Maya Reid 20 November 2008

Simple and direct, but effective and soooo relevant-everybody's been there. Very nice.

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Angel (Pepper lyons) 30 October 2008

Very good, Simple but meaningful. I liked it. ~Angel From With In

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Serenity Prayer 23 October 2008

great job. i love it.

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Alyssa Boccardo 24 September 2008

this poem definatly has a lot of emotion in it. i like it you really show how much you were into it at the end when you wrote 'I WISH'

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Karina 20 September 2008

I love this poem, its absoulutly amazing.... so sweet

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Sara Lane 19 September 2008

Nice poem i can tell it's coming from the heart! !

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Joseph Poewhit 18 September 2008

WAIT - it just might

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