Friday, July 15, 2016

I Wish Comments

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I wish I was the rain
soaking the roof of her room
and the fields far away,
mixing their dampness
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Istabraq Al Ahmadi
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Othman Marzoog 20 May 2017

Your poem flows just like a river and great imagination, it is too nice poem.

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Nosheen Irfan 21 July 2016

A beautiful romantic piece. A very clever and skillful use of Nature imagery to depict an intense feeling of love. The easy flow of words in your poems is very pleasing to the reader's senses.

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